I love someone having that kind of control over the Doctor and him getting smacked down for his arrogance concerning his cavalier attitude toward Jack's suffering. He has so many things to thank and apologize to Jack for.

Your version of Jack's missing years is great. I never believed it was because he did something bad, except in eyes of the Time Agency. It seems so right that he'd defy their order to protect a child. Sad that there isn't a way to give him his memories back though. Maybe Savitar could do something about that?

Artemis should be very afraid of Simi, especially if she's hurt Jack, which seems pretty much a given. Her rescue companions are nothing to sneeze at either. I think she's going to regret this little stunt.