http://bluelilacs.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] bluelilacs.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] blucougar 2011-06-26 07:24 pm (UTC)

Poor Jack having to deal with the random memories as they surface. This one was pretty horrible. I'm glad he told Ianto about it so he'd understand that his problem with the police isn't just a distrust of authority figures.

I was mentally trying to send Jack some 'helpful' advice when he told Gwen that Ianto hated it when he made unnecessary messes, as I really think you have to look closely at just exactly what constitutes "unnecessary". After reading your a/n at the end, however, I happily bow to your expertise as a writer and wait patiently to see what you have in store for her.

I especially love this part of your a/n:

"The difference here is that there is no one in the team who will pander to her ideas of self-importance."

Thank you!!!

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