I'm so in love with this series! I remember reading it back on ff.net :P I'm so pleased that you're painting Gwen the way the rest of us see her! The only tiny criticism I have is that you used an American reference to the schools: "Everything from Kindergarten through to high school graduation." It would be playschool to... well, it depends. Secondary school is till the age of 16, but you don't graduate from it. 16-18 is college, again not graduating. After that it's uni that you graduate from. Hope this helps. I've never seen you do it before, but I just thought I'd let you know :) Can't wait to read more!